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在多年的雅思培訓(xùn)中，東莞海德英語(yǔ)的錢(qián)老師在雅思寫(xiě)作中，總結(jié)了一份如果提高雅思大作文的文章，今天分享給各位同學(xué)，也希望各位同學(xué)能在東莞雅思培訓(xùn)取得好的成績(jī)。
我們以兩道題來(lái)看看怎么建立CC。
《胡敏雅思第七代教材(基礎(chǔ)版)》選題
Some people argue that children should always follow their parents’ advice.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
以Body部分的一個(gè)段落為例：
先讓步，讓步也是為了讓行文更順。不然，下一句中的more reliable這個(gè)比較級(jí)可能顯得唐突。 Parents’ advice cannot be perfect; it is however more reliable than children’s own opinion or decision. 接下來(lái)解釋為什么more reliable，是對(duì)上一句的細(xì)化。信息的細(xì)化是一種信息順延關(guān)系。Going through life’s many events, parents know the world better than their children, who are naïve and are novices in dealing with the many issues of life. 然后，筆者引出一個(gè)并列的理由。 Meanwhile, when a parent gives a piece of advice, it is for the good of the child. The good intention must be recognized. 然后，筆者通過(guò)例證應(yīng)對(duì)前文所述的理由，針對(duì)上一句的抽象內(nèi)容來(lái)舉例也是一種搭建CC的方法。 For example, a parent may object to the child’s puppy love. The child may follow the advice and avoid the heartbreaking moment and disappointment, which the parent experienced when he or she was young, when the premature romance ends.
2019年5月18日真題
Employers should give their staff at least four weeks’ time off work a year to make employees better at their jobs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
以Body部分的一個(gè)段落為例：
建立“聯(lián)系”，應(yīng)對(duì)“連貫性(coherence)”要求。
從four weeks的特點(diǎn)切入，先說(shuō)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)就能走的遠(yuǎn)：The four weeks would be a time that is long enough and thus allows employees to travel far. 順著“遠(yuǎn)”，以國(guó)外為例細(xì)化“遠(yuǎn)”：For example, some vacationers may spend the overseas. 再?gòu)?ldquo;遠(yuǎn)”引到“靈感”：As the destination is far from and probably different from home, which may have confined the workers’ minds for long, the exotic culture may be theirinspiration for work. 接下來(lái)，并列一個(gè)理由，時(shí)間長(zhǎng)所以可以好好體會(huì)，產(chǎn)生智力上的火花：Meanwhile, during the four weeks, a time that is long enough, vacationers may be able to fully appreciate the different life and generate intellectual sparks. “靈感”和“火花”歸于一點(diǎn)之后，引向work better：At this point, employers can expect the more efficient and productive job performance of their staff.
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